headline: what if we could fix your fucked-up script once and for all?
sub headline, speaking to transformation/After state
Paint the before picture
"True mentor and master structuralist"
Susan taught me the painful lesson of destroying my work to make it better. I often hear her voice in my head when I’m preparing to cut a character or break some story bones. “There’s no crying in baseball, son.” Ain’t that the truth.
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